Friday 22 March 2019

2019

Hi my name is Tom,
And I like to play Football and playing handball with my friends.
Last year I was at Ormond school.
My class that I am in now is Ensor's lh8.
My goals for this year is to Make more friends.
I admire my mum and dad because they care for me .
I went to splash planet. in the holidays

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  1. Anonymous20 November 2019 at 10:28

    Hi Tom. I like the colours you used in your poster and you look cool in your picture. I think you could take out one or two of the words 'like' and maybe change to another word? my name is Torenze and i go to kaitaia intermediate
    school and I am a year 8 and I am in room 8.I hope you like my comment.

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