Hi Tom my name is Pyper and I'm a student at Ahipara school.I like how you put in what they eat and where they usually live and there size they grow up to. Also I like how you put in colour in to your background .Next time you could put maybe some more information about different species of bear and what are the different between them.What made you want to do a slide about a Andean bear.
Kia ora Tom, I liked how you chose to write about the Andean bear and added some facts about where it lives and how large it can grow. Did you know that the polar bear is the largest bear on earth. Maybe next time you can add more slides and facts about it to make it more interesting. Why did you choose to do a post about this animal?
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Hi Tom my name is Pyper and I'm a student at Ahipara school.I like how you put in what they eat and where they usually live and there size they grow up to. Also I like how you put in colour in to your background .Next time you could put maybe some more information about different species of bear and what are the different between them.What made you want to do a slide about a Andean bear.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tom, I liked how you chose to write about the Andean bear and added some facts about where it lives and how large it can grow. Did you know that the polar bear is the largest bear on earth. Maybe next time you can add more slides and facts about it to make it more interesting. Why did you choose to do a post about this animal?
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