Kia Ora Tom, I really enjoyed reading your post. You have used some some great language to describe what was happening. Keep up the awesome mahi. Miss Poi (Elgin School)
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Kia Ora Tom, I really enjoyed reading your post. You have used some some great language to describe what was happening. Keep up the awesome mahi.
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Hi Tom, Olivia here I really enjoyed reading you story it sounds very interesting at the moment, i cant wait to hear what happens next.
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