Tuesday, 21 May 2019

Te Maro


LI: to write about a moment  in time. Captain cook arrives at Turanganui a Kiwa in October 1769

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Tom, I really enjoyed reading your post. You have used some some great language to describe what was happening. Keep up the awesome mahi.
    Miss Poi (Elgin School)

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  2. Hi Tom, Olivia here I really enjoyed reading you story it sounds very interesting at the moment, i cant wait to hear what happens next.

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